Advert feedback for my blog buddy

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                       This post is about writing some feedback for my blog buddy Jenny's advert 


- Are the initial ideas and development clear?

The initial idea of her advert and development was clear and brilliantly executed.

- Was the research completed and was it clearly linked to the advert?

The research was completed and posted on her blog, she researched about other adverts and found information about the product she was advertising.

- Was the process shown with commentary about tools?

The whole process was shown on her blog, about how she created her logo and her own images to completing the actual advert.

- Was the final outcome clear? Could there be any improvements?

The final outcome was clear and personally, I found it an excellent job, everything was very creative from her amazing colourful, self-made images to her well-written slogans.


Here are Jenny's end result adverts :





Source: Jenny's blog address



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